Peace Power

Here is a poem that I standardized at the request of my friend and fellow writer Afzal Shauq. Below my poem, are his powerful words :)





PEACE POWER: By Katherine MacDonald



I heed critisism from my fellow man,

that you cannot be a man of peace.

For mankind has faltered too heavily,

and we are born with killer instincts.



But I, a child of Eve and Adam,

have devoted my life

to what answers we seek.

Instead of critizing, embrace the answer,

that there is hope from a man of peace.



Because inside is a faith so strong,

that honestly believes in a healthy future.

From the core of my heart,

I've emitted all of my strengths,

in hopes we will find an answer.





PEACE POWER: By Afzal Shauq



"Instead of

criticizing my love feelings

to the cause of peace

Isn’t it better

to open the hearts of those

who

being the children of

Eve and Adam

proudly consider me

as their own universal family member

and respect my words

omitted for them

from the core of my heart"

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well done kaherine.. you did it well and standardized very professionally... like it and these two poms will side by sie in book... like the way

Afzal Shauq's picture

well done kaherine.. you did it well and standardized very professionally... like it and these two poms will side by sie in book... like the way