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One Man's Angel(Is Another Man's Whore)
One man’s angel is another man’s whore,
Did you think that you’re the only one who gets to score?
Before your foot even steps outside the door,
I’m already admiring her décor galor,
While you’re off at work, we’re home at play,
In the very same bed where at night you lay,
I definitely understand this
I definitely understand this . But you should add more to it so far well done
thanks
I wanted to make it longer. I plan on making it into a song. I usually write very short poems because I think of them as verses in a song, but I would definitely add more to it. I just don't want to force anything. I like when things come to me naturally.
You're failing to capture me
You're failing to capture me so far.... Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
cool
cool
R u kidding! Lol! This was
R u kidding! Lol! This was nasty but oh so good!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
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you're confusing me. you just contradicted yourself.
No I was being cheeky riding
No I was being cheeky riding on allets comment, it's good! :) cheers SS I'm about to read omniscient I hope it stacks up cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
ok
haha i didnt catch that cheekiness. thanks though
Whores Are Interesting People
1. they disgust and dis all women consigning them to a class of ner do wells, living outside God's law, disease prone, promiscuous, oh no!
2. they are concerned about their own body's satisfaction and don't care who puts them outside the realm of angels - angels, bye the bye, are fierce creatures and vendictive as hell.
3. they work, have kids, get married, do all the things "regular" people do and still get labeled, if i wrote a poem about bastards or assholes, well, men are different, they acknowledge their shortcomings and those of their brothers and others.
4. I almost did not read the poem, kid - and yes, you are not supposed to care - you are poet, we hear you roar!
5. Whore - distinguised from pro or bitch - women who sleep with multiple partners because they love sex can go to therapy and excite their therapist with tales from the dark.
6. I could go on, but shock value is lost on poets - we go where nothing is sacred, labels are acceptable, censure is forbidden and preachiness is taboo.
I say all this on behalf of most of my whore friends who are too proper to admit it - The poem was artistically rendered, I have absolutely no problem with it's content or vocabulary what so ever - I just like to rag new writers. You have a strong ego, you can take and give, righ? - be well - allets
haha
yea, i dont care. its all good.