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Just Another Day
The sunlight breaks the morning, the moon lights up the night,
And somewhere someone's crying, not feeling quite alright,
A country caught in conflict, a people locked in war,
The bills keep growing higher, our happiness no more,
Somewhere someone's dying, they can't afford to eat,
And somewhere someone's freezing, because they can't afford the heat,
From dawn to dusk thats how it is, it's just another day,
I don't know where i'm supposed to go, I've gona and lost my way,
So how do i get back on course, to where I want to be?
What can I do to change things, and become a better me?
I can't read between the lines, they don't make sense at all,
Who'll be there to catch me, if and when I fall?
Alone I'm not so powerful, but together we're a force,
But do we really want to change things, do we even feel remorce?
Amazing piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up :o)
A really great piece here. Love the arrangement. Love the way it flows. Some real views and life dark side. Very nice poem!
wow, ican't belive no one critiqued this wahooooo I'm the first. this was a wicked poem, Aaron. it's sooooo true that's how I feel most of the time. But my thing now is "Life is boring" it's the moments that are exctiting. you have to catch the moments and wrapp em around your finger and then ya just feel like blah in the fill in space. yah know I dont make any sense but your poem did keep smiling goos stuff Kat>'.'<