First Love

When I first saw you it was heavenly

A love I wanted so badly for so long

Was dormate

And with your first glance at me

It was active immediately

Telling our stories

And sharing our lives.

Could I ever ask for more?

You stared into my eyes

As if examing my soul

And you kissed me.

Right then I knew

I loved you

It was almost more than I could bare.

How could I ever love someone like this?

To this day I wonder

But I have you

And although many possibilities

I believe this love is because of you.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem sometime my freshman year in high school.  It was when I was dating Shea.  After all the angst in jr. high, I wrote about boys in high school.  I started writing poems again from jr. high to high school when I started dating Shea.  I even wrote one for Anthony while I dated Shea.  Hahaha...thanks for restarting my writing boys.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

wow... like your songs too...wonderful and great way you did..hope you go through my poems too to be in touched and share more and more ...I am with 6 books and all are on line too..my work is online in www.allpoetry.com too...hope you do your too... your comments are awaited...

vipervenomnu's picture

look the same way once and I see
beyond these words there seems to be
A sad sort of knowledge of it's end
I don't know if you ment to send
these hints, thought they help me peer
I think even now I can see your fear
of love and all the power that it has
over you and I try to understand
though I think I know but can't comand
my thoughts to words for the sake
of telling you your heart won't break.

This is a lovely poem that you have writen my dearest Caitlin. Like I said before I think they help me understand you a little better, though I would hope that by now I understand you well. Don't ever stop dreaming, and don't settle till your dreams come true, because you deserve all of them.

poetvg's picture

beautiful
poem