Diamond's Languid Loft

I lay in this hotel bed,

with its white on white sheets.

I'd never take a client to my home.

which, to us, is an astounding feet.

I do this because I need the money

though it isn't something I enjoy

I can't keep living like a peasant

and must give in to be these men's toy.

I'm not one of those meager street walker's

I am a high class callgirl.

If any man decided to take the chance,

I can promise to rock his world.

Right now I'm in the bathroom

cleaning my body within the shower.

But though I'm thorough I must be quick

my next client is in an hour.

So I scrub the last's essence of my skin,

he smelled like booze and death.

But I could barely cringe away from a customer

despite his burning hot breath.

I shake away my revulsion

and change into something sexy

Ready for some new pervert to knock

eager to lay down on top of me.

I pick up my perfume and spray

and rub red lipstick on my lips.
When suddenly there is a knock on my door

I walk over while swaying my suple hips.

I take a moment to calm my nerves

and to tap down the surging panic

Feeling breath flood into my lungs

and my heart beats seem gigantic.

I flash back to old memories

a strong and giant man holding me down.

A small girl screaming "Step-daddy don't hurt me."

But he continues as if she hasn't made a sound.

She brings herself back to now

with a hard and violent shake.

To flash back to days of old now

would be a horrible and dire mistake.

So she thinks back to happier thoughts

returning to her second life and friends.

And opens the door to her next client,

surprised to see a familiar face------ Her Husband.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is the last of the three characters in the Prostitute stories: Again this is her beginning but not her end.

 

Brief description of the characters:

 

Chanel: She recently turned 16 and has just began to prostituting herself. She does it "secretly" for reasons that have yet to be discovered.

Mercedes: She's an 18 year old prostitute who's been in the game for two years. Her parents turned their back on her for reasons that will come out later and because of it she is mean and bitter.

Diamond: She's 21 and married. Clearly the oldest of the girls. She's been doing this since she was 14 and had a rough start into life. What exactly happened to her is unknown.... FOR NOW

 

All these girls are connected.... YOU just don't know how yet.

 

What happened to Diamond as a little girl? Why is it hard for her to think about? Has she always been a prostitute? What Will happen with here husband?????

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ashes_theartofburning's picture

I agree with nightlight,

and this is the first one that I have read, but man! if you didn't have me sucking in my breath at the end! Whew! I loved it! What a great way to keep the reader interested. I think that you are on to something! Keep it up! (^.-)


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

DreamingNightmares's picture

Thank you both for your

Thank you both for your feedback! I'm glad these stories have managed to draw at least a few reader's in.

nightlight1220's picture

This entire story is

This entire story is fantastic. I have not had a chance to read all of it yet, and tonight after I finish reading some of Wordman's stuff, It is on my list. I think it is good you are shedding light on the subject of adult women who make this choice in life. It is an area of great controversy that I am neither for or against in it's current existence in our world. I feel that there may be many call girls who are very happy doing what they do, albeit, am not so happy they go unsupervised and enter without appropriate psychological testing. We live in a country where sex issues are high, and repressed in comparison to some european countries where sex is not such an obsession. People here have a twisted version of what it is. I am not saying this is a remedy, but could be, if used appropriately with strict controls....and ...TAX the hell out of them!! Lmao.

 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

DreamingNightmares's picture

I'm glad you enjoyed it. And

I'm glad you enjoyed it. And once you get a choice to read the others I shall eagerly await your feedback! Please don't hesitate to give it. And I started writing these "rhymed stories." To show the lives of these girls and how they live and become the way that they are. Also there are many surprises in store for them so make sure you continue to read or you'll never quite learn them all!