11. 17. 2004 re-revised

hear i am again

preaching my word again

maybe i am trying to get my point by

maybe i am helping a frend



i am sorry for helping...

helping when iam the one

who needs the help but I

refuses to get it  and I

fucking just sit and cut,

lie, and punch , kick

resist because your

the one I miss



death is not an answar

or a choce at this time

with no time to chose

will i win or will i lose

am I gonna fight and kill

am I gonna sit and die

will i stay to help

in this little hell,

or sucsced, grow up

and have a family

and make everyone happy?



an adult, i am ready to be

just held back by tecncalitys

soon to be i gusse just a

juvinal like the rest

or maybe i can brake free

from all of the tecncalitys

  just maybe

Author's Notes/Comments: 

live, tell a lie, dont assocate
your self  with me
hell just go and be happy in your perfict world just dont forget to kiss my ass and die
                         and dont u fucking forget it

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piggy's picture

well you emotionaly puked on me then you puked on the computer then literaly puked next to my house then at your house..god you need to see a doctor about that.. i liked it a lot it was really good ...oh and tell paul i really like his poems to there really good ...so besides that i love you a tun !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

beautifulpain's picture

I'll let you look at the poem some time but I just deleated it. I felt as if it's not my place to make those statements that I did. I also just dont want Jill to see it and get affended. In someway. I just know it would do that to her.

beautifulpain's picture

Wow we must be conected phycologicly cuz im pissed off right now and it seems that you are as well. Im gonna call you later. If you wanna find out why im pissed look at my newest poem call "one last complaint". I'll ask you why your pissed.