At two, fingers gripping the edge of the crib,
watching their faces, silent:
“Look at her,” my aunt said to my mother.
“Look at those eyes.
She looks at us as if she were already an old lady, not a baby.”
Before you, I was
(practical).
I knew when love came, I would be beyond
teddy bears and chocolate hearts;
that I would continue to be unmoved by the tired clichés of
love songs on the radio;
and that I had long bypassed the silliness of
“highlighting my eyes”; pretty clothes and styled hair.
But since you, I find myself
wearing pink
wanting flowers and
dinner with candles
putting on the clothes I know you like
and writing you
love poems.
You make me want to put flowers in my hair;
be a girl, for the first time.
And after twenty-four years of watching
the ‘old lady’ finally become a young girl,
they nod to each other and say,
“Well, she never did do anything in the right order.
Doesn’t she look pretty, though?”
I really like this, especially the "eyes of an old lady" and "never did do things in the right order." Maybe they'd both be tired if used on their own, but your combination of the two really makes one reconsider what you wrote.