Spring

Folder: 
1993

It's warm and the rain drops are

starting to fall.

Shh!  Listen: drip drop, plip plop!

The flowers are starting to blossom

white, pink, and red.

Their pretty smells

their beautiful look.

April showers washed the flowers in

spring

as the sun was shining brightly.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written when I was 8 years old...can you tell? :)

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Geoff Mcmullen's picture

Your age may have been eight but your perception and ability to express are timeless

poetvg's picture

GOOD WORK

Mica McCook's picture

I can't believe you wrote that when you were 8. I thought it was very mature and beautiful. Simple, yet it said so much... good job.