It's warm and the rain drops are
starting to fall.
Shh! Listen: drip drop, plip plop!
The flowers are starting to blossom
white, pink, and red.
Their pretty smells
their beautiful look.
April showers washed the flowers in
spring
as the sun was shining brightly.
Your age may have been eight but your perception and ability to express are timeless
GOOD WORK
I can't believe you wrote that when you were 8. I thought it was very mature and beautiful. Simple, yet it said so much... good job.