2004-03-06 Would You Love Me If I weren't All That

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Book: Castle View

They are is bartering for your affection
Weaving their words
Shifting their eyes
"I dont know what to do
"Lover
"I dont know what I feel.

 

"My car needs help
"My heart needs you
"My furnace is broke
"My husband is dead."

 

Bartering for your attention
They are begging for your love
And you think-
"It just because
"I have two legs"

 

"I'm not in jail
"I have a job
"My dick gets hard
"I'll fix the car-"

 

Fading women's beauty
Beauty fading women
Look to you
To fill their wants
When they need

 

Its hard to know, lover
Its hard to be sure
If the love I feel
Is not just
Bartering for your affection.

 

But you are all that

I would still barter for affection

If you lost your job

your dick got soft

and you went to jail.

 

I could probably find

Someone to fix the car.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The Woman's Movement changed all the rules. But you are right I might not love you if you werent all that...But you are and so I do...and because of that I should still love you if you lost your job your dick got soft and you went to jail And I could probably find someone to fix the car

Former called the Woman Before

The bartering of affection
Weaving her words
Shifting her eyes
I dont know what to do
Lover
I dont know what I feel

 

My car needs help
My heart needs you
My furnace is broke
My husband is dead

 

Bartering for your attention
They are begging for your love
And you think-
It just because
I have two legs

 

I'm not in jail
I have a job
My dick gets hard
I'll fix the car-

 

Fading women's beauty
Beauty fading women
Look to you 
To fill their wants
When they need

 

Its hard to know, lover
Its hard to be sure
If the love I feel
Is not just
Bartering for your affection.

 

But you are all that

I would still barter for affection

If you lost your job

your dick got soft

and you went to jail.

 

I could probably find

Someone to fix the car.

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your dick got soft and you went to jail And I could probably find someone to fix the car

If his dick got soft, he didn't go to jail and he fixed the car, would that be acceptable??