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2002-10-16 He Dwells Between My Legs
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Book: Castle View He dwells between my legs
He knows the key to my heart
And he is looking for the door to my soul
He peels my layers
Like the clothes he sheds from me.
He looks at each with revelation
Like the curves of the nipple
He traces with his tongue.
He hungers for me
As he bathes me in senses.
Searching for knowledge
He tells me of my beauty.
Searching for clues
He tells me of my allure.
Searching for the pathway
He tells me of my intrigue.
And he dwells between my legs
And he has opened my heart as wide
And my soul is there,
With outstretched arms.
Brilliant poem. It is nice to see an erotic poem done so artfully.
Very very nice, I really liked it.
Wow!
Starward
Hi Deborah:
Just writing you to let you know that I really loved this poem. Thew sensuality and eroticism diplayed in this masterpiece is breathtaking-you visualization skills peak in this beautiful adventure. You have so many skils as a poetress that it is mindboggling-you have definitely been given the rare gift of prose. PLEASE DEBORAH NEVER STOP WRITING NO MATTER WHAT!!! YOU HAVE BEAUTIFUL AND INSPIRING ARTISTIC SKILLS MY LADY!!!Please take care and thank you for sharing this beautiful sensuous erotic poem with me.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
10/21/2003
What??? I am the first to give a comment on this poem?? My gawdd...well I hope I can do this piece justice then. This is one of the most beautifully sensuous pieces I have read in a long time. It really took my breath away and has really struck me speechless.
All I can say is that I really LOOOOOVED this poem!!
Well done indeed!!!
Pax,
LadyHawke :-)))