Surprise

While you were sleeping

I got up and slipped outside.

So that when you woke up,

You would be surprised

Cause the plan that I had

Was long in the making,

Something that you'd never forget,

It would have everyone talking.

Everything was perfect,

I had everything planned

I wish I could see your face

When I showed my hand.

You knew that I was planning something,

But I couldn't let you know what

All your friends knew,

They were all in on it too.

So you ran downstairs

And you opened your eyes,

Looking for your special

Little secret surprise

All you could see was that

Everything had changed

So surprise..

You'll never see me again.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is my first in a while. I'm not happy with it, but it's a rough outline of a concept I had for a poem, so this will be here until I improve it!

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running_with_rabbits's picture

wow it's almost like soemone was planning to marry someone and then found out they were cheating, I really like how its kinda telling a story but then bang it's not what you think, I love when poems floor you like that!

keep it up

ash


Much Love

Ashley

rosalind's picture

congratulations, it keep getting better just the trust.