There you are
Shining like a star
With beauty you do gleam
The angel of my dream
I wish to hold you in my arms
To protect you from evils charms
To feel your gentle touch
That way I know you're there
I know I'm asking for much
But your name is beauty to my ear
You I truly adore
And I do wish for more
My mind is stuck on you
Leaving me not knowing what to do
My heart wanting you to take a chance
Though I don't seem like much at first glance
Together they wish to hear you say
ON some unknown day
You asking :will you be mine"
And of course I would be thine
These are only dreams
For now that is what it seems
i like this poem. it's very deep and heartfelt. i can feel soul from it. keep up the writing. it's very good. i believe you could become a famous writer. and if it's your dream to do so, then you should go for it and not give up. you're a great writer and don't let no one tell you differently.