I'm never fine when I rhyme

I'd put it all on the line
But that'll have to wait for next time.

When someone considers me enough
Perhaps our love won't be so rough.

I'm tired of being bitter,
I bet I've become an ugly critter.

I never did have high self esteem
Show of known we were a dream.

If only I'd been given telepathy
I'd known the depths of your apathy.

I didn't know when you left
The severity of your theft.

You took my ability to care
Love is anything but fair.

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NF_Angel's picture

Great write.     Love does

Great write.  


Love does lead to heartbreak. 

*~I know I'm blessed, but I'm cursed to ~ NF*

allets's picture

"Severity of your theft"

Emotional and often property. well said.