fear from my pain, it runs up and down
my spine like a networks, it sits
deep seated in my brain,
refusing to move, defiant and denying.
coldness on my lips, the cold is
numbing me from within i can feel it
from my toes to my finger tips, i almost
feel like a shot in my spine wouldn't kill
me now, i'm already dead now
you can't hurt me now, i'm frozen.
i look behind me at my twice
nowhere past
i look for where i fucked up
i looked forward at my future in life,
it seems to go nowhere, so short
and denying, so defiant and refusing,
why did i even bother?
I liked the title, and the poem itself was haunting and raw.
The description used was fantastic. Oh, and the running lines, that continued on, were very effective.
Lauren x