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"Beneath her mask"
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Recycling Beneath her mask
Lies a lonely child
A child in pain, is she worthwhile?
Would you waste precious time to take away her pain?
Would you leave her alone, let her cry in disdain?
Beneath her mask
Lies a hesitant soul
A soul unsure, without a role
No part to play on a rainy day
No part for her soul in the Broadway plays
Would you waste precious time to save her soul?
Would you blow it off, would you stone her with coal?
Beneath her mask
Lies a normal girl
A normal girl in a messed up world
A world full of chaos, panic, disorder
A world for her that gets colder and colder
Would you warm her up, would you melt the ice?
Or would you walk away, would you refuse to be nice?
What would you do for this lonely girl?
This lonely girl in a messed up world
This lonely girl with a hesitant soul
This hesitant soul without a role
What would you do to remove her mask?
Or is this, for you, such a hard task?
wow! this IS GREAT! you are very talented I can see by only reading one of your poems, this flows really well and is just GREAT! You rhym very well too, GREAT JOB
This is a really well written poem. It shows feeling and thought.
well done, its obvious that alot of thought was put into this poem, well done.
ali
Miaka,
This is such a beautiful poem! I can tell you put a great deal of thought into it! I can relate to this sooo much! It really speaks to those who read it, telling them to not look past that lonely girl but to be kind and help her to "remove her mask." Having been in the postion of the girl in this piece, I know what it is like to have someone kind help you out in finding your place in the world. Thank you so much for putting this feeling into words!
Lauren
hey hey hey, behind the mask and beneath her mask! lol. Love it, great beauty put to it. :) keep it up
This is a well written poetry. Clarity of thought very well presented with questions to the wonderful people of this wonderful earth. Good job Miaka. Keep it up.