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For years we fought

And months we argued

We just didn't get along

And then one day it all stoped

So I wondered why

I soon found out that you were gone

That you had passed away

In your will you had wrote

You wanted me to know

That for all the years we fought

And all the months we argued

Was just a way of hidding that

You loved me

I just wish you would have told me because

I LOVED YOU TOO!!!!

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I classify this as a favorite, simply because it is the very first poem I had written.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 7:29am
©11 January 2002 - 12:02am — MzMidnite
13 August 2005 - 5:31am — Christie Brennan (not verified)
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i cannot even grasp what an intense feeling that would be to find that out. i liked this, a lot.

23 April 2002 - 9:00pm — DeAnna Shaddy (not verified)
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Very well said. We take a lot of things for granted in life.
I'm one of the worst about that. Thank you for sharing this.
=O)

12 January 2002 - 5:37pm — HAWK SQUAW (not verified)
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how sad to find out that someone we love is afraid to let us know that they love us....... until it is too late that is..........

thank you for taking the time to share this with us here at post poems......

hawksquaw