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TODAY I FINALLY REALIZE,
A BLIND STARE THAT MAKES ME WANT TO DIE,
FOR NOW I SEE THE TWINKLE IN MY LOVER'S EYES,
HE IS AS SWEET AS SIN,
AND HIS LOVE FEELS GOOD AND PURE,
BUT IT SEEMS THAT EVERYTIME HE HURTS ME AND COMES AROUND,
MY HEART IT GETS COLDER , AND STARTS SNOWING DOWN,,
FOR EVENN THOUGH HE BRINGS ME WARMTH,
HIS FIRES HEAT BURNS MY EYES,
AND I DO NOT EVEN REALIZE, THE LOVE HE BRINGS ME,
CAN HEAL MY LIFE!

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last updated 7 December 2012 - 5:34pm
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7 December 2012 - 5:33pm — Jesster
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the comma at the end

the comma at the end compelled me to finish it. ;) Cheers!

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7 December 2012 - 5:14pm — Jesster
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His fire's heat burns my

His fire's heat burns my eyes.
And I do not even realize,
the love he brings can heal my life.

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7 December 2012 - 5:30pm — Desiree
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THANKS SO MUCH I NEEDED HELP

THANKS SO MUCH I NEEDED HELP WITH WHAT ELSE TO MAKE UP !