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Would Anyone?

Would anyone even care if I were to disappear?

Would anyone even care if I was gone like a vapour?

What if I died tomorrow, would someone even cry?

Would the memories be good, or would they be glad to say goodbye?



Would anyone even realize I was gone

Would anyone even notice that I was once alive?

Would I leave an imprint in someone else's life?



Would I be missed, would people think of me as someone?

Was I just a person in the way?

Or was I just a person all alone, trying to find his own way?



Would people think of me as special?

Would people be shocked if I died?

I know I don't want to be part of this life

I no longer feel like trying

I just want to be in heaven

Where all pain, and bitterness ends



where there is eternal happiness and security

Would there be people still upset with me?

Would there be people attending my funeral?

Would people mourn, or would there be complaints

Of what a better person I could have been?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just stuff going on through my mind and it's doesn't rhyme but may be it goes through other people's thoughts!! Would people truly care if you died? What if you were to die suddenly?? Would people remember you as selfish or greedy? Anyways my mind is cluttered with stuff. This would probably make people think right??

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 7:16am
©25 November 2004 - 5:39am — deethepoet
5 May 2005 - 10:49am — justme4him
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i think this would make people think more about the way they could make their life useful as they live at present.
it made me think about my last day, would i be content that my race is over, that i've done what God wanted me to?or would i regret that i was so scarred to give more of myself, to walk more on God's way?
i don't care what people would think at my funerals, i'm striving here so that i could hear that day: "well done, good servant, enter the Fathers joy"