was it over?

was this over before
before it ever began
feels like forever
since i have sinned

they said the good die young
yet im still here
what have I done
to deserve everything that’s going on

no escape from this hell
no possiblities for a pleasant stay
this pain wont go away
and it seems like no one will stay

only one thing to turn to
only one thing to look forward too
so close I can almost taste it
but so far I can only dream it

moving on is so close
yet so far away
this was over
before it ever began

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thisisme789's picture

Nice poem. It was an easy

Nice poem. It was an easy read, and made me wonder what was going through your mind while you wrote this!


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deeplysensative's picture

Thanks

thanks, theres always a lot running through my mind lol but this poem was specifically about a friend

thisisme789's picture

Isn't there always =P

Isn't there always =P lol.
And this friend, was it someone special? =)


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Yes

yes, it was someone very special to me

thisisme789's picture

I'm sorry =(

I'm sorry =(


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Its ok

Its ok, things happen and times change... its probably better off this way anyways, atleast for one of us :/