Bitch, but a Titan

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2020

I understand the success rate is 0%

when asking somebody to calm down 

but I plead for you to relax

and take every ounce of support I can offer

 

Yes

your rejection hurts 

like tearing off a band-aid 

but it's a righteous pain

with thought and purpose

and unlike the gray areas

available on the ready for you

my heart and mind remain clear

once the dust settles

and I hope you believe that 

because I do.

 

Even now,

I believe you deserve my support

as a resource

and a trusted vault

even from a distance

because you're a fucking titan 

and you're worth everything you want elsewhere

and I cannot bear 

to see those eyes

with such genuine doubt

staring blankly ahead

over and over

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

We do not progress in pain

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saiom's picture

'' I understand the success

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I understand the success rate is 0%

when asking somebody to calm down"   wonderful

 

a beautiful poem about unconditional love

 



 

 

deepblue's picture

a heartfelt thank you :) 

a heartfelt thank you :) 

allets's picture

I Liked muchly the

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And yes we wish them joy and success, not doubt.

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Onyamaichi

 

deepblue's picture

Agreed :) and if space

Agreed :) and if space provides comfort from me, so be it. Just hurts cuz I want to love her and be there to support her, but life goes on 

Cascade's picture

Damn...I feel you, deepblue,

Damn...I feel you, deepblue, I hope they do too.  ☮️

 

deepblue's picture

They don't :/ life goes on

They don't :/ life goes on tho, ty for reading 

lyrycsyntyme's picture

Love, the layered thing,

Love, the layered thing, indeed. We can truly care for someone, and care for them greatly, but not necessarily in the role that they may desire, or that we might once have desired to play. 

 

It's a tough line to walk, to step back from one type of love while staying in another, and one your former partner may not embrace now, or perhaps ever (though that may change over time). Still, to offer it is to truly care. Your writing is not just good, but timely in regard to thoughts on my mind. Thank you.

deepblue's picture

A heartfelt thank you :) take

A heartfelt thank you :) take care 

allets's picture

Reread - Felt Loss and Support

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My new motto is: I'm staging a coup d'etat. I'm taking my mind back!

a return to rationality and psudo-calm. :D

 



Onyamaichi

 

deepblue's picture

Nobody else will be calm for

Nobody else will be calm for you! Haha! Gotta seize it when you can