This slab of oxidized copper
a perfect stranger you've known for years
I put behind what cannot be altered
and set my sights on hoards of beleaguered unknowns
searching for an ailment
Assembling at the makeshift triage
...some call it a bar...
I provide what charm and heart I can scrounge together
on a given day
from the tired, leaky vessel
..still, the haggard seals holding strong
They often find fairness in my bravado
so after cordial nothings
we serve each other chivalrously
playing the games fully-equipped
conversation thermometer
room barometer
and a heart monitor on full power -
..maybe they just love the attention, I could always be mistaken..
..but their finely-tuned eyes aren't missing a moment
enticed minds chomping away
like carnival-quality kettle corn on matinee
*sigh*
Even after donning the weather gear
I often leave unsatisfied here
because while I'm fully aware we're all a bit crazy and guarded
so few actively seek the discovery of how the game works..
so few question the craft
so few look for the keys
and ask the honest questions
and really, they're fine with that
Just once
that's all it'll take -
because I'll know when I see the inquisitive warmth of legitimate curiosity in your eyes -
I want to want you
to challenge me..
dare me
to show you
an affection that may be weathered
but more importantly, remains malleable
and if I find your will to be true
and my eyes are satisfied
I promise
that I will stay
when others quietly fade
Bear me the beautiful burden of wielding Cupid's arrow,
rather than existing alone
as the tarnished, aimless slab I represent today
and if so be done, so I begin with only you
concurrent anew
booyeah! what a great
booyeah! what a great piece!!!! SOME AWSOME LINES GREAT FLOW, GREAT IDEAS! GOOD SHOW! hugss SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thankie much as always
thankie much as always
Wow wow wow wow! set up a
Wow wow wow wow! set up a triage station... call it a bar... it is cool on so many levels. This poem is very selfconcious and interesting I loved seeing your take on the journey I also share... What strange comfort it is... I never thought it would be but. it is. Absolutely Great write!
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
That's great! I wrote this a
That's great! I wrote this a couple weeks ago but literally just added that 'some call it a bar' line a couple days ago hahh, I'm glad you enjoyed the piece! Take care
Like Mom In Harry Potter
"Deepblue, where HUV you been!?" ...inquisitive warmth of legitimate curiosity... is the reason I write and read poetry - in the hopes of running into THIS line. Exquisitly composed - prescious and beautiful ~Lady A~
I'm around :) just don't post
I'm around :) just don't post a ton but i like to read other people's work and edit some of my older stuff. But I've hit a string of writing I'm happy with lately and I wanted to post em up. Glad you enjoyed this one Allets :) Take care