I’m not as strong as I need to be
If and when I lose the ones I love
The remembrance of rightfully having only one beginning and one ending
Burns a hole in my psyche
Remorse ensues
longing for more time........
It’s my honor, privilege and responsibility alone
to take these memories in
Accepting the weight on these shoulders
and condemning the worst in me -
I ask of wiser beings than I
to bestow an honest compass
phasing out the wretched brat in the forefront
the same way I phased self-torment from the background
Accepting a new role at the round table
with vitriol anti-venom
and the same diligent practice
and hand-carved precision
that cast a saturated heart afore
I must understand there is no tomorrow in contempt -
Only a stifled punchline of spirit will remain
and a warped resolve that will seep into my pleasant dreams
Yes, trekking onward sounds like a good plan
Exuding love in a cynical world
Making and marking
footprints in the fallen snow
for those who gave me the chance to walk -
that is now my path
Channeling your courage
should these knees buckle in hardship
You can all climb aboard
We will go anywhere.
An open souled poem truly!
you touched that quiet place in me that barely whispers when it speaks. Thank you for a lovely liaison that blends feelings with words, knowledge, experience and thoughts. The outcome of such carefully folded ingredients was in the end I believe this truly remarkable poem...........I am smitten with the aura of your spirit............deep poets never grow remiss......... so very sincerely, Melissa Lundeen........
thank you very much
I am really flattered from your kind words - I'm thrilled and grateful that it meant as much to you as it does to me...thank you once again, take care
you are most welcome but it should be I thanking you......
you just inspired me to write a poem. I just posted it. Titled 'Twisting In The Wind'......... your poem was the inspiration so I give you sir all the credit........... Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.