Special, Magnetic, Real, Home

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Beneath these honest roots

reaping seeds from the fruits of love

treasure earned, something uncaged

mutually intrinsic

unlocking beautifully tangible dreams
enhancing the cinnamon-sweet midnight air

 

Understanding universes in our eyes
we gaze profoundly

visualizing the hues as angular gateways within
keenly probing the beautiful prisms
cherishing the clarity and calm of reassurance

confidence in knowing every level of shade

yesterday's world careened our way 

cannot touch today's infinite lumens 

 

I lure a smile
so vivid and energetic, serene and organic
there is no finite digit
to encompass the times
I want to see it again
and again, and again

 

The sunshine you possess is undoubtedly
exactingly
perfect to me

 

Where your will is a hammock
safe and secure, honestly structured

 

Your passion is lemonade
the sweet elixir that bathes a barren gullet

 

Your kindness is a salve
gentle, soothing heart

 

and if you feel the same

I truly believe for each other

we will be

 

Somebody special
Something magnetic
Somehow real
Somewhere home

Author's Notes/Comments: 

5.17.12, changed it up a bit..wanted to try to eliminate daunting words, thoughts.. meaning I wanted to reduce the thought of putting pressure on another person who feels like they have to live up to some unattainable status... and honestly that's just not the message that I'm trying to convey here...this is a love note, this is a gesture of fun, peace, warmth, not something to feel constrained over and I retooled some wording to make it softer, less rigid

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cassyjerrett's picture

brava! i love this!

brava! i love this!

deepblue's picture

thank you very much, I always

thank you very much, I always appreciate the support

Juxtaposify's picture

Amazing...I'm at a loss for

Amazing...I'm at a loss for words, which doesn't happen often lol
Just wanted to say bravo!! :D

deepblue's picture

haha I hear that

..I always tend to have *something* to say hah. Thank you very much, I greatly appreciate it :)