Sometimes when days turn to weeks, to months, to years
life's thrill of discovery
and sense of wonderment fade
In no uncertain terms, this is undoubtedly expected - nearly welcomed by many.
Wisdom and experience denotes the absence of the rat race
associated with vivid naivety
resulting in healthy, tailored realizations
and sensible limitations abound
But if a sizable amount of life lessons
remain unburnt in raw mental wood
or if redeemable quests' rewards
remain wholly misunderstood
the cranial dulling
of brightest colors internal
runs a risk of warning labels erased
if mental sun emerges nocturnal
Sudden fear when your warped reality
not in lockstep with a loved one's noble sanity
Terror surfaces, leading to hiding
from revered eyes in plain sight
powerful, yet equally blinding
alleviated in validated light
Chaos boundless
overruns
open opportunities shunned
when a pure heart within obstructive muck
of bad outlooks and worse luck
in acceptance
opens up!
The ability to thrive, much easier
accepting loose freedom in this ether
as a beacon rather than pylon
generates rocket fuel to surge upon
a power to bond and destabilize notions wrong
fulfilling a promise to generations
before and offspring everlong
taking your place on rightful perch
discarding the worries of pounds to envision your worth
satisfaction reigns with courage to burn
when you offer wheels grease to turn
Wise
words!
from experience,no doubt!
wonderful verbiage and convincing!
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
First Two Lines
Open up such potential that is well explored in tone. Beacons and pylons ~ was like stumbling into a symbolist's adventure. I like the sense of time as aging. ~A~
thanks as always, it needs
thanks as always, it needs work but I'm pleased with it for now
A perfectionist
okay I'll look back later:)
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
A Pleasing Write
Stopped by and had chance to re-read this gem. Exceptionally revised, miraculously conceived, beautifully executed. A keeper! Hugz and more hugz ~A~
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"...life lessons remain unburnt in raw mental wood..." gave me pause. Nice.
definitely went back to this
definitely went back to this one a week or so ago and tooled around with it, thanks for giving it another look allets :)