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Perfection Deflection
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2015 Perfection bred from desire
Perfection, smooth and seamless
Deflection led through the fire
Deflection, fueled and flawless
Perfection bred from practice
Perfection, punctual and pure
Deflection directed with malice
Deflection, purposeful and lured
Excellence achieved through sacrifice
Manipulation slipping through vice
When fully flourished and done
Perfection and deflection meld into one
Wow this absolutely
Wow this absolutely spectacular..... Bravo.... I love it!!! So clever :)
You're too kind, thanks for
You're too kind, thanks for the positive feedback!
Cool write! The mirror has
Cool write!
The mirror has two faces.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks! Yea I don't know what
Thanks! Yea I don't know what to really call the rhyming structure but I wanted to try and keep it as tight as possible, in my opinion this is more of a visually-pleasing write than something read aloud I'd assume...I try to change it up every now and then to challenge myself.
Haunting
I love this, I find a very personal truth in it
You are most kind, a
You are most kind, a heartfelt thank you to you
Perfect Deflection
This was fun - Enjoyed ~Star~
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thanks Allets
thanks Allets
"...Slipping Through Vice..."
Upon closer reading, these lines become haunting, touching things best left unfelt. I call it writing inside the lines for the emotional seepages that only the finest poets can mine. Marvelous write (read aloud this would be astonishingly mind stopping). Thanks to you for creating it. ~A~
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Your praise is forever
Your praise is forever welcome and is part of what keeps me writing :) thanks as always
It is August 2015
and the magic is still vibrant and there. I am on hiatus for a while, but you have left a body of intellect and emotion, memory and now to last me a while. Still, will look wth hope for ANYTHING new. ~a~
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