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So many tales about the lost and found

Aimless wanderers wholly unbound

 

Searching for a bullseye

Emotional pen in hand

just sign on the dotted line

and hang a hammock near the sand

 

but so many reservations

logical rescue bands

prohibiting assertations

of peaceful land

 

Natural wind meant to whip

often doesn't satiate yearning humans

so will a compass north

with infinite box fans

go forth

and get yours!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I suppose in relation to what the theme of this is about, I feel like a lot of what I've put together of late is lackluster in quality...but I've learned over time that putting anything down is theraputic and can also blossom into something excellent over time and editing

 

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©22 February 2015 - 6:15am — deepblue
23 February 2015 - 11:20pm — MilMan
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Unreasonable Doubt

I like who it's put together and I believe it will get much better. Still a good write.   MilMan

27 February 2015 - 10:01pm — deepblue
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Such a frustrating topic to

Such a frustrating topic to write about, the emotion's so undesired but there's a satisfaction in getting it out, appreciate your kind words of course :) thank you, keep writing and take care

20 August 2015 - 5:30pm — allets
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"...emotional pen in hand..."

1st Writes are closest to the initial ideation spark - tamper with lightly - near perfection need not be further from the goal to simply say. ~allets~

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