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Why
Why do i keep coming back?
though it hurts
everything you have put me through
all the pain
though i still love you
even after all of that
4 years have passed
and nothing happens
it just get worse
why dont i give up?
why do i keep going?
when your not there, i feel lost
without you there im lonely
maybe thats why i need you there
but in the end i should just give up
once and for all
you call me yours but is that enough
It's all in the name.
It's all in the name. "Deathly pencil"....gotta love it. Go get a pen and write something that can't be erased.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Four Years?
Ooooooookay. Time to move on, I say. You're loyal, give you that. I'm practical I guess. ~Lady A~
so relatable..
I cant explain how much I relate.. my 'bf' just drove all the way to my house (an hour away) after I left him this morning,just to win me back... I said no 'cause I dont want it for myself because it only hurts us both; but everytime I look into his eyes.. I NEED HIM.. I love him.. I cant go... no matter how much I try to talk myself into it. great poem!! thanks for sharing.. It made my night soo much better :D
sounds like you have a person addiction more than anything....
love and addiction are two different things. Think about what love really is and try writing about that and see if that holds up to what you have with this person who keeps hurting you.I think you will find that is not love. Welcome to our big little community and thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Most Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.