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passing thoughts
Erase the time but not the day,
Dont loose the meaning why we pray,
Expect nothing, long for life,
Open the doors to find away.
Lost, confused, amused by fear,
But dread is why the reaper cheers,
instead embrace the dark and sad,
so light can shine on everywere,
You cant hate without love,
there isnt darkness without a light,
The blackest crow and whitest dove are only diffrent through our sight,
confused about the reasons why there is a world were we all die,
and all the things that couldve been...just passing thoughts throughout my mind
Wonderful, wonderful! Bravo!
Lovely sentiments and verses now cleaning it up proper so this wonderful diamond shines if you need assistance let me know, toowonderful a poem with a great message full of soul! Mind you I'm not one for too many corrections unless the poem is really worthy! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
haha..thank you
greatly apreciated...i havnt really put any mind to doin anything with poetry, kinda chill out n do it on the side for fun.Same with art n music...dont even have really any understanding academically for poetry.. shit, i probably took like one class in highschool and read a book or 2. growing up creativity was embraced so i always liked anything to do with it thats really why i started writing...id love to get stuff published somehow in a gallery..maybe even do a open mic, or spoken word or somethin. endless possibilitys really, but when it comes down to it i procrastinate alot, haha...i wrote alotta these in like 10 minutes most of them are all as is. there all still sorta rough drafts. again thank you, always good to see people like my stuff