The Wind

I rode with the wind one day,

it carried me so far.

The hidden secrets of the world,

It showed me where they are.

Smell the trees and flowers

Taste the wind and air.

Don't dwell to long on

Everyone else's despair.

Caress the cresting water's edge

Let it lap lightly at your feet.

Until the moon sets on the horizon.

and the sky and the mountains meet.

The sun sets on sorrow,

and rises on elation. 

Shining on our darkest fears,

A mother's life creation.

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nightlight1220's picture

Yes!! Oh dazed, I love it!

Yes!! Oh dazed, I love it!


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

DazedByLife's picture

Thanks to all of you!

Thanks to all of you!

Jesster's picture

Yeah, me too. Nice additions.

Yeah, me too. Nice additions. :)


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nightlight1220's picture

Beautiful verse. Mother Earth

Beautiful verse. Mother Earth has so many things to elaborate on! She is timeless.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

nagelmodel's picture

Sensitization

I admire Deep Subjects. You show me that you have a lot of quality in such terms. However, it is bitter short of juicy details. More Details! please..Forgive me for being nosey, but I want to smell more, and more..you have lots too offer, yea?


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DazedByLife's picture

Its been extended a bit :)

Its been extended a bit :)

Jesster's picture

Kinda makes me glad it's not

Kinda makes me glad it's not night where I live yet. Lol. But I'm with nagelmodel. More juicy details!


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