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Diamond Smile, Smokey Eyes.
You'll find me out where the smoke's most thick.
Holy middle man, turning broken faith's new tricks.
Occupy the room between stumble and fall,
Ears trained to pick up the siren's last call.
Spoiled lover's plans, I give the devil his due.
Drunken waltz through all the gardens where my dreams once grew.
Threw my chips in with Old Seven and his wicked brew.
I've been kissing on them bottles, when I should be kissing you.
Lay my cards out on the table, always two up my sleeve.
Pull broken diamonds from your smile as I take my leave.
Trade pretty words at empty promise's door,
then tip the waitress and hope to god she's a whore.
There's a cat out at the graveyard and he's digging for me,
Lay my bones out, buried treasure, in a dirt-filled sea.
His cracked tooth smile as he says with a wink,
"Most people feel like floating when they trying to sink."
;-)
This line makes the poem for me, "Most people feel like floating when they trying to sink."
:) I loved that poem! "I've
:) I loved that poem!
"I've been kissing on them bottles, when I should be kissing you"
it would seem you have taken the notion from my ex ;)
Much Love
Ashley
Um..
WHAT THE HELL MAN?!?
Where have you been?
"Occupy the room between stumble and fall,"
Ugh!!
Not just that line which by the way I am in love with!
Odd yes I am.
This whole poem screamed at me!
Even the title!
You piss me off we cant be friends ..
Too impeccable.
I want to cry in my dust filled corner because I wish I could of wrote something like this.
Ugh!!!
Splendid, and remarkably creative.
Asshole!
=^.^=
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Dirty Seas
...buried treasure, in a dirt filled sea...what a fine line of poetry, descriptive, full of finality...I liked this line, the poem was dark and full of gems like this one ~~~Lady A
Not bad, not bad!
Not bad, not bad!