You can't compete with reality
The truth comes out eventually
Soap box or not
You're revealing your identity
And it was never a surprise
Holding hands under the table
Having drinks at lunch time
I smell a future from across the room
It's us burning in the sunlight
Cause the big reveal is
We're both suckers for self sacrifice.
captivating.............
I smell a future from across the room<------------- the absolute best line in this whole poem. I adore originality more than oxygen sometimes. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.
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hahah thanks : ))
Love it! Great writing
Love it! Great writing
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hey thanks
Step Inside
Nice reality all over the surface - enjoyed twice - LADY A
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Thank you !