Who is there really to impress in this league of life?
Drowning in the depths of acceptance
Only to be pushes back out to sea
The luck of life without a paddle
Trying to swim to the top, only to choke at the bottom
Well, hang up your hat mate
Cause were lost at sea
And this ship will always take a wrong course.
To the fishes.
~m.s
I like this poem honestly... The only thing I have to say is that in the title, the word "except" is a preposition, not a verb. Other than that, it's fine... Nice write.