here it is, the
elixir that they promised, I have worked hard
for it, we all
have, following the instructions
that appear on the whiteboard and
disappear soon afterwards, that’s why
I dislike whiteboards, everything’s
so easily obliterated,
the beginning is long gone, and I can’t remember
how we started
or what the reason was,
I just know that for a few
million half lives I have been
measuring, titrating, heating,
filtering, discarding leftovers,
watching them go down the sink
sucked into shadows or
whatever lies below, I’m no longer sure,
no one’s sure, everything is
changeable, I started with a piece of copper
shining like golden earth, where has it gone
now, dissolved and transmuted,
most reactions are reversible but I can’t
get the same atoms back, as the colours fluctate
it seems they have
no end, but they do, it’s what
I’m left with,
a pretty blue fluid,
the shade
the ocean used to be
though the sea is grey these days
and tastes bitter
like sitting here, staring at
this worthless blue liquid
which is a solution in one sense
only
https://thoughtexperiments2015.wordpress.com/2015/11/12/the-colours-i-lost/
Thank you everyone! It's
Thank you everyone!
It's great to know that someone enjoyed it :)
Really like this
Like JM said.
The blend is unique.
KS
I very much liked it! :)
I very much liked it! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
wow!
excellent write! love the metaphor, as if engineering meaning through chemistry.
Bravo
You are a most welcome addition to Post Poems. Encore!