Lover's Lie

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Pain in the soul

I guess it didn't occur

That it was a lie

That it wasn't true

She waited for him

Waited and waited

But he never showed

never returned her calls

Not a single one

She didn't see a problem

He was just busy

Thats what she thought

Thats always why

She never saw through

The Lover's Lie

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I am coped up and have just been writing, not too good, but oh well

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ramonathompsont's picture

Damn this one could be my

Damn this one could be my life. I don't wanna believe he's a liar but I think he is.

DarkLight's picture

Give him a chance.  If he is

Give him a chance.  If he is a liar, hurt him worse.  If not, be happy.  Thats what I do with lying girlfriends



justanotherscreename's picture

I liked this. If I was more

I liked this. If I was more poetic than I am, I would take the last bit and expand on it. It is inspiring the way it flows off the tongue (yes I read it outloud because I liked it so much).

"Thats always why

She never saw through

The Lover's Lie"