Do you remember the ruins where we once used to lie
All day about our dreams and our fears
To ourselves and each other
We’d build a mirage in our minds
With your cigarette smoke as the sky
With my words as the walls
And the unspoken reservations made for an unstable foundation
Of an otherwise flawless production
This palace of lies, this palace of dream
Decorated with lyrics and doodles from the margins of schoolwork
With tattoo desires hung not from frames but instead by nooses
And those bright shiny floors of the finest cedar
And the attic of my darkest nightmares with my paintings of shadows and blood and
Knives and unused letters
The bedroom of our love rested below
Where the promise of forever was tainted with your sharp silver tongue
How I wish this was real
How I wish this was true
But we must return to life when the sun retires to the hills
And the moon emerges to mock us with her captivating grin
We’d lie until your burning stubs became the brightest star
The brightest hope we had left
And as you extinguish it upon the expired floors
And we left without a word of the dreams we left in the smoke
LOVE this!!
Favorites- "knives and unused letters" and "my words as the walls". Love!!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
I Concur
I enjoyed both your use of very descriptive words and powerful phrases. Your use of metaphors (and larger words than the normal vernacular) was refreshing; as well as reminiscent of more classical poetry. I hope that you will continue to write, as it's apparent that you have a natural gift.
~Seraphim
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem