T U R MO IL

You say you would always be there helping me along the way to happiness

then you went and changed disappeared now there's only a voice in my head



do it cut yourself make it better end your life no one will care find your meaning in this world HA!!!! it will never be that again



SO where are you now that my life is fucked hitting my head at every door step taking this knife to my arm and press it down slide it along till i see blood



BLEED DOWN BLEED DEEP LET IT FLOW LET THE LIFE ON THIS METAL TELL A TALE LET THIS BLOOD GO DEEP DEEP TO MY SOUL LISTEN HARD HEAR THE SCREAMS THAT I SING





what do you say now that im gone  you showed back up to say what  that you were wrong that you were cold how do you feel knowing this was cause of YOU.

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Melaney's picture

really well written the first 2 lines are something that a lot of people, like myself, can relate to therefore they're a really good hook making you want to finish reading