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Orchestra Of The Night
Iam the darkness that feeds on fear.
The torrential evil that destroys what you hold dear.
You learn to hate the love i share.
As i leave your corpse in a petrified stare.
Your body grows numb and your limbs stiffen.
As your blood runs cold as my fangs dip in.
Now there's no emotions or anything human left.
Finally Ive won cause your soul Ive just theft.
Welcome to my world of darkness and dismay.
As to say your final good byes cause you'll never see the light of day.
i loved this one as well, espically lines 5-7 i have a feeling that this one will be my favorite out of all of them
I like this a lot.
Hello, its Erin. I thought this poem was dark, erotic and beautiful. I loved it.
You work well with rhyme. I liked this one because it reads differently than most under the same fantasy style. Perhaps it isn't a fantasy but a reality? You have a real talent for conveying emotion. Talk to you later.