I'm staring down the barrel of life.
One pull of the trigger and i might not survive.
No one to stop me, no one to save me.
Maybe it's my time to die.
Hands trembling....Heart pounding.
Can i do it? Can i pull it?
Oh, Please someone stop me, someone save me.
I don't want to die, to leave my meaningless life.
To hurt the ones i love, to make them cry.
someone save me....
Too late! Why didn't you come?
I called your name a thousand times.
I feel my life slipping, pulse slowing, heart stopping.
I came into this forsaken world alone,
didn't think i would die alone.
i think this poem is realy good as it shows how some people are in life i think you should keep writing poems like this well done
alison x