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Mommy I have a question
Mommy why did you leave?
mommy it wasnt time
now im left to cry
you werent spost to die
you abonded me
no longer to see your face
making me go insane
causing my boby pain
mommy why did God take you away?
this stuff i need to know
was i a bad child?
i know i got a little wild
did i bring you pain?
this thought of you gone
im unable to gain
i miss you so much
i wish you were here to touch
i love you with all my heart
soon we will no longer be apart
Kayala, hi, this piece brings tears to my eyes . I lost my mom at 13 myself so can relate. I don't know how long ago you mom passed,I can tell you given enough time the pain will ease ,it never goes away completely but it does ease somewhat. remember your mom for the beautiful loving person she was and that she is watching over you always. I'm now 51 so it's 38 years mine is gone,every July 28tyh is very hard for me even now but I remind myself I was fortunate to have her as long as I did and that gets me through.......
Yes. Good poem.
I know the pain behind it. I lost my grandmother, she was a mother to me Grand meaning the greatest. I loved her and I still can not believe she is gone.
I wish you the best.
-Rachael Daniela
Hey. I love this poem! It really shows how your feeling. I mean I as the reader really feel what you feel in this poem. I like that in a poem. Hopefully you will be reunited with your mom in heaven some day. :)
Keep writing,
ME