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Alone
When im alone in my room
your thinking im safe from all doom
but what you don't know on this day
in my room is when my friend comes to play
so I grab it and sit in on my bed
all kinds of crazy thoughts in my head
as i talk it over for a bit
my friend tells me its time to slit
it brings out a color that I hate
But the feeling is oh so great
it makes me never want to put it down
it you knew what i did, you would frown
so forever will my friend be safe by
till the day comes that i die
is when you will soon see
just how much my friend helped me
Ill tell you what I think. I love this poem! I think you should definatly enter it into a ocntest. Its a great poem. Hmm wierd u hate the color but I love it its cool though. We all know what this poem is about and thas y i love it. You put the words together and didnt point out the point of it but if ur smart enough youll firure out what this poem is about.I absolutly love this poem kayla!!!
Hey -
You posted a comment on my friends site, so I checked out some of your poems. I like this poem because it seems genuine and I can feel the emotion in the poem when I read it...it comes alive. Enter it in the contest it's a great poem.
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you commented on mine so i thought i should read a couple of your poems... i really like how you told me what you did... it makes me feel like im not the only person who does it for THAT perticular reason... nobody understands.. but hay yah i like your poems, and i think that they are great.. feel free to email me or IM me when im on.. i have aim .. im not on as much ne more tho.. but yah X3AllHereX3...thats only one of my sns.. sry this is really long... but hay... well nice commentin to ya..
-me