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-Cuts-
The deeper I cut
The better I feel
where drops of blood
are the only thing real
hurting on the outside
destroying my skin
is better then the pain
of keeping it in
My body is a tempel
yet so is my mind
witch do i hold dearer
how do i decide?
the lost land of happyness
swimming in an ocean of fears
for one drop of blood
for every two of my tears
Hey, this one is very good. hard to decide which is more important sometimes...but your mind is the only thing you can make work for you...in reality. Thanks for signing my book...And thanks for such a deep compliment.
Rock on sugar pie ;)
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Wow. That was realy good. keep up the good work
Nice poem just came to check out ma gurls aweosme ass poems! Keep writing and Ill keep qritiquing.
this is a beautiful poem keep it up :D