The Fallen Path

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Once I walked the Fallen Path,
I heard the cries of the Kindred Souls,
I felt the burn of the Shadow's wrath,
And became a Broken Whole.
 
Once I fought the Mirrored Beast
Which I still battle with today,
I lost myself within the Hollow's Heart
As I tried to find my way
 
Once I lived amongst the Nobodys,
Feeling something dreary deep within.
If only before then I knew
What was foreshadowed to begin.
 
Once I felt the Eyes of Judgement
Pierce deep into my soul,
I went to scream only to find
Somehow my voice they stole.
 
Once I walked in the Silent Stills
My hope and strength depleated.
Never in any of my life before
Had I felt this defeated.
 
Once I walked the Fallen Path
Marked with darkness and despair
Only to find the monsters along the way
Were truly always there.
Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a poem symbolizing the steps of depression that i went through, the end of the poem symbolizing the realization that one has to overcome these obstacles. Comments appriciated :D

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Yes sir ee you did it! Great

Yes sir ee you did it! Great piece! I like the reviving door journey... It can feel like an endless cycle, a good thing to know you can break through! Cheers ss 


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