So much...and I bet you can

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DaphneeD

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So much

...and I bet you can

I give up so much

So much

I get nothing in return

Nothing

I am willing to give you the world

All I get is pain

Pain

I am so tired of all this hurt

I cannot take it any longer

Hurt

I need more than just a man

I need everlasting love

Man

Where is this all going?

Do you hear my heart beat?

Do you even care?

My world is turning upside down

My face shows the pain

Yet, again I am being pushed to the edge

Can I escape?

Author's Notes/Comments:

I wrote this for a friend that is going to through a though time right now.

3 August 2013 - 5:34pm — a.griffiths57

I hope your friend makes it through her pain and finds inner peace. Your poem was so full of pain it was pain to read but a good poem.

22 September 2013 - 4:42pm — DaphneeD

Thank you for your comments and thoughts.