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so close to being a broken man
dying in silence a little every day
nobody seems to understand 
even the strong feel pain 
as the darkness grows the light
that guided fades away
alone in darkness he cries
his witness is the everlasting sky

~ D Donner ~

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©13 September 2014 - 3:52pm — Daniel-59
16 September 2014 - 5:16am — Beavis
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;-)

I always love the passion & fire I find when I read your work!

16 September 2014 - 6:09am — Daniel-59
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Coming from you Beavis . I'll

Coming from you Beavis .

I'll take that complement and run before you change Your mind !

 

Thanks .

~ DD~ 

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

19 September 2014 - 5:08am — allets
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I'm Prosing Poets

 

Any problem with me prosin' U? Yr work is notesworthy and fine. Threads hold us together that are made of ranting madmen and madwomen, better known as writers. Worse, poets. I would have been quiet all my life if i had not been taught to write it down. My entire work is a continuous suicide note that will end when I die of natural causes. - Nice writing - Lady A

 

 

 

19 September 2014 - 8:57am — Daniel-59
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When it come's from someone

When it come's from someone of Your caliber Allets, I have no problem with anything you say ! Thanks 


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Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces