Those whispering pines

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whispering pines

 

can you tell Me please
what it is that I've done
that made her push Me away

whispering pines

you know you've always been home
but I've got to go
I can't stay here alone
watching her go on with her life
without Me

 

whispering pines

here I am in the jungles of a 

far away place
a place that's not meant for Me
how I long to hear the gentle breeze
as you whisper to Me

 

whispering pines

it's been such along time
the picture in My mind is fading 
with each passing year
I no longer know if I'll ever call
you home again

 

whispering pines

alone at night
I yearn for you
as I still do for her
but I'm afraid I'll die
far from either of you

 

whispering pines

I wish now she'd never taught Me
to listen to you
as I wish I'd never listened to My heart

Oh how I miss the whispering pines
whispering in My ear
with our young hearts beating as one
under those ............

 

whispering pines



 ~ D Donner ~
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A rewrite or a continuation of an older piece
I wrote long ago 
 
~ D D ~
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Far From Home

The yearning is there emotionally and emphatically, but the ending is soft with the cliched "young hearts as one" hmmmm. Nice voyage though, the hurt is heavy ~~A~~