love is just another one of those children's nursery rhyme's

I was like a lunatic, dying for her love.
I would do anything. be anybody.
give everything.
I let myself fall tumbling deep in the darkness.
into the drowning pool

why is it I am cursed
I hear her voice even in it's absence
is this what they call love
a emptiness that is indescribable
the loneliness that runs rampant
through my soul
like the blood that feeds my veins
the hurt I feel
the wounds that never heal

I've grown old way to fast
of all the things I had to learn
Love ?
love is just another one of those
children's nursery rhyme's

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This is a strong poem full of pain

I like the ridiculousness of the childrens nursery rhyme I also find it quite clever as the themes are really quite gruesome in nursery rhymes and they are made up sweetend but really they are about tragic themes... I like the sensitivity you have showed here too! great work D. Cheers SS


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