all so tempting

half asleep and whispers in the night plage my soul
where recycled dreams and nightmares overflow
in the darkness of my depression is left but one final impression
there are so many different ways to end up alone
I have memories of rainbows and stars and the heart's desire
filled with cracks and scars
I will never be the person I thought I could be
I fell apart so long ago
Isolation is my grace I embrace
a knife,poison, rope, or gun
all so tempting, but I'm not done In this life
...........................................No not just yet

~ D Donner ~

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allets's picture

"rainbows and stars and the

"rainbows and stars and the heart's desire..." Nice consonance (alliteration with S's). I kept snagging on it, wondering why, very musical. I'm not done yet either. Sombody somewhere needs me and there's life in the old girl yet! Good to see you writing - :D 


 

 

sweetwater's picture

A very thought provoking

A very thought provoking write, complex feelings many I am sure will relate to. I liked it very much. Sue.

Daniel-59's picture

Thank You

Thank You


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces