you fucked Me senseless

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I Hate The World !

you fucked Me senseless

leaving Me hot an sweating

wanting more 

then you fucked Me over 

leaving tears behind 

 

~ D Donner ~

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I don't usually use such

I don't usually use such words in My Trashcan poetry 

but there is the occasional  

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Harsh words, spitting anger

Harsh words, spitting anger and betrayal. Don't like obscenities but in this case they do add force and expression to this powerful poem. Sue. :-)

 

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SweatAndTears

Less profane than authentic & 

appropriate use. So much in so

few words. ~A~