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come embark with me
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The Ramblings Of A Madman come embark with me on a trip into a maze
without exit
knock on the door of a hollowed soul that
sing song's of sorrow beneath the silver moon
amity and memories set in stone
remembrance presents itself in cryptic tones
come with me dance through the mind
of of one of the broken heart'ed
~ D Donner ~
Melodic Melancholy
I very much enjoyed the singing quality of this write, the skill used to form word combinations that imitate remembrance. The shell belies the serious topic and the depths where emotions dwell - but as a poem, it is very fine indeed. I re-read it from time to time and feel better ~Star~
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