Imperfection of love

I wrote my love for you in a piece of paper

Wishing you knew me better

do you know how it hurts to see you with another?

Its like killing me, its so bitter



Ive never wanted to want you

But what can I do?

My foolish heart needs you

I just can't forget you



A love with a mighty pain

It's so sad and im vain

The love is full of game

I hate myself so im to blame



My faith in you is fading

Maybe its good than dating

I dont give a shit! in waiting

And the solution I know is leaving.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem is about a guy who i really like but never like me.

about the grammar? the whole poem? im here to express not to impress so im not gonna apologize in making some mistakes. well i know its ok. im still 15 and i can improve my writing skills:)

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Afzal Shauq's picture

you added a really good and heart touching poem with your romantic expressions..love it and wish if I read your all poetry..and you go through mine too if it touches your heart and soul being peace willing way